Tuesday, July 3, 2012

Chapter Two

Hey I hope ur interested in my story please comment so that I know someone is reading :)
Here is a very and when I say very I mean it , a very short part but hope it gets u tensed up and excited!
Tell me what u think so far! Enjoy! :)

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-Previously-
he wiped my tears and gave me a hug and I headed to the plane. As I was heading to the plane i had this little fear inside me, I was afraid that what happened in dubai well... Happens in NewYork...
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As I walked to the plane this fear was hunting me,it grew bigger and bigger it was eating me alive I remembered every single detail on that Day I remember every single person laughing at me... It was horrible.. It was embarrassing... It was something you wouldn't want to experience... People might think its not a really big deal but to me.... It's something I would never forget...EVER...

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Hey please comment tell me what u thing so far... I hope you enjoyed and as soon as I get at least 1 comment I promise you to post the next part!

iMysterious~

5 comments:

  1. great start so far! WE WANT MORE!

    btw ur emarati? i noticed the accent! CUTE!

    yallah next post bsr3a! sh9aarrr? :O

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  2. Yup Im emarati! Thanks a lot for reading!! :) inshallah I'll try my best to post the next part soon :)

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  3. umm a7saa really really short ur posts .. Could you please make them longer w 76y ketha spaces please <3<3<3 love you !

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  4. Ok! Thanks for the advice! :) and ok I'll try my best to make my posts longer

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  5. plss can u make the post longer and more detailed so we can understand the story but for now ur story is amazing:D

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